Jess. B. Hendricks

I like the idea you have. It is a nice start also. Although my opinion is that you could work on your sentences a little. For example don't start your ...

This seems to be a good short story. I like the way the writer is pondering and then realizes the truth. It is kind of confusing as to what exactly ...

I just thought that i would drop in and say hi to everyone! Nate was kind enough to welcome me and give me some helpful suggestions. Looking forward to conversing ...